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Loss of tears
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Loss of tears |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden 
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Loss of tears burn my vision Knowing the future Set in stone Destined to be alone, by ignorance of choice My heart is drained, spent emotions mean no more No other can fill my loss, or yours Flip side of the coin, fault is mine Never to be the same Searching makes no difference Pretenders will never fill this void Begging to call Wishing on that lonely star Hoping that night will come Searching the sky Blinded by memories set to rest What come’s next I know where I stand Never will I second guess Trust at hand Afraid to take a second chance Fault will be assigned No one will ever question Thoughts and worries I still love you Lets be friends. How can I stand here by you and not be moved by you I love you. Love Steve. Everything, I love you!..Please forgive me! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh...this is touching! |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Thank you gentle spirit, I love her like you could not believe. It's my own fault. I would give anything to be at least friends. I love her and I wish I could do it all over again. Steve. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Steve, this is so sad, I can hear the heartache. Just tell her, then let it go forward, if that's the direction it's meant to go, without regrets. Wishing you well. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Aww! I love this one. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Thank you all for the kind responses. I just felt like writing, but I know it's all just a work of fiction at this point. Thats why I love this site, you can post your feelings and write what is on your mind. Midnitesun, Thank you for your response. I will move on with regrets and short comings. I wish I could go back in time, lol. Thanks. Steve. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I love this! Very good write!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Steve, this aches so bad.. I hope you can move on and all your wishes come true. Hugs~ |
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