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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2004-12-15 09:50 PM



When We Parted
~ By Sue ~

Oh how I wish our love could be
the way it was before
when we first met
and our love was for sure

You captured my heart
making me smile
You gave me tender love
I hadn't felt in a while

After we had parted
I felt empty inside
My world came to an end
but, I wouldn't let myself cry

Today, even after all of this time
I find myself thinking of you
wishing you were still here
loving me like you use to do

12-15-04



© Copyright 2004 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-15 09:52 PM



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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-12-15 11:02 PM


You will find love again Sue ... the kind that you are deserving of. You have come so far. Take heart dear lady. hugs, Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-12-17 08:48 AM



Not all gifts can stay forever...
they have to make room for new presents
of nature, time, and love.


Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-12-17 08:52 AM


Hi Sue!
Good to read you here today....
Great piece here..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

     Season's Greetings!

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5 posted 2004-12-17 06:04 PM


"Today, even after all of this time
I find myself thinking of you
wishing you were still here
loving me like you use to do"


*sigh*

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

vandana
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6 posted 2004-12-17 06:55 PM


good read
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