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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-15 02:13 PM



there was no wind today
just the sun on your smile
like a morning
on the ocean
when she touches tides

you paid my thoughts
with professional
and stood sideways longer
than I needed
to hear those voices again

we walked upstairs
and I heard your jeans
whisper how good you felt
when you wore them
as your makeup

you wrote me notes there
and I had to read them
from your mouth
as you made them into poems
in a language I never heard

but would beg to learn in time

_____________

Dark



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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-12-15 02:14 PM



We so appreciate
your spare moment
poems...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-12-15 02:14 PM


you wrote me notes there
and I had to read them
from your mouth
as you made them into poems
in a language I never heard

but would beg to learn in time

you? begging....lol....now that in itself is an image that brings a smile.  lol....
loved this m'friend. huggin you slowly...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-12-15 02:15 PM


*smilin' at you*
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-12-15 03:01 PM


love the feel of this - especially the first and the last -

Hugs -     Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
5 posted 2004-12-15 04:16 PM


there was no wind today
just the sun on your smile
like a morning
on the ocean
when she touches tides

Lovely!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2004-12-15 09:06 PM



there's an art
and a grace
in begging
when it produces
the desired results

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-12-16 06:37 AM


Striving to purify beauty and importance
Learning size & secret of relationship
An immense tall mountain each human climbs
Some arrive, some fall but continue on
Because it is…one of our purposes
In order, harmony and even sacrifice
To adjust to nature’s magnificent prose
What and how we affect ALL
Coming to understand how swimmable temperatures
Remain warm when ALL comes together

Excellent observation Mr. Sensei…hugs

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