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Confused Invitation
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Confused Invitation |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR 
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Double Doors one closed, locked, One wide open, inviting both being bright blue and big, Shadows shade the closed half, Yet do not diminish the poorly erected frame of self construction. Two doors, one structure opposite decisions opposite feelings Same meaning, A confused invitation |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
extremely well crafted and presented Kristabell...with much meaning layered in the words. Very well done. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Time like this, I always look for a window. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...you wrote this well |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristabell, this is vewry well written. It makes the reader think, which is very good. Hugs, Ethel |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write! Very well written!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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