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Open Poetry #34

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ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

0 posted 2004-12-15 11:54 AM

Black stars in the sky
turned to shadows embrace the blue of dark hearts
tame the eyes and minds of liars in the wind
they crumble
crumble cold with nothing real or true to hold
but themselves
with distrust and disgust even though they form a pack
like wolves are the moonlight pouring over a meadow
they are unlike the sun and skew the meaning of light
breaks the silence through a forest canopy
where a black star flew by unheard

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-15 11:57 AM

I couldn't even pick a favorite line....
this is a very impressive write full of vivid images. Very well done!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

2 posted 2004-12-15 12:10 PM

^_^ Thanks. You really are a gentle spirit.
" In the hearts of those who love..." that's just awesome! I also believe that.

- Haze

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-12-15 07:46 PM

Wow Haze - this is excellent - well titled too - nice to read your words again -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-16 04:14 AM

a very deep feeling here, a mood...nicely described

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