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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-12-15 08:21 AM



does it bother you
how your flexibility
seems to fit my intentions

no hands or eyes
folding lady into woman
making wings butterfly

from vibrations
they shiver shape shift
outside to in they begin

and on some no name street
you pass your other self
as she parks at the curb

with veils bound around her wrists

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-12-15 08:30 AM


you are tenderly watching a lady grow, into a woman...with your kind eyes...

Well done, your a very allowing person....sitting back watching, allowing everyone else their day in the sun...and you know, that my friend, deems your happiness, grace and intellectual 3rd eye

Hugs to you and thank you for sharing

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-12-15 08:32 AM


you expose the naughty
from the buttoned up dresses
of the nice church ladies

you bad boy ! shame on you !

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2004-12-15 08:39 AM


ms lee j...thank your for the thoughts and warm, you bless me often
_____________

ms inky, and you smile so wickedly as you sit improperly in the first pew, spank you so very much

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-12-15 08:48 AM


Smiling here...
one of my favorite comic strips,
when I can catch her, is
Rose is Rose...

a loving housewife, who enjoys childhood
daydreams with her adventurous son...
but when she is alone and frustrated,
her "alteregobikerwoman"
takes over...

she makes me smile, too...

Well done, Sir!

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2004-12-15 08:52 AM


ms sunshine
can see an alterego
stepping out
hmmmmmmmmmmm
imagining how yours might be....


thanks lady friend for the eyes

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-12-15 09:40 AM


*smile*

ah those veils again...

nicely done D!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-12-15 09:44 AM


wink and smile..
hold your wrists still please


Susan
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8 posted 2004-12-15 10:29 AM


Perhaps the lady is Shaherizade - and though veiled, beneath lies the spirit of a thousand and one nights - perhaps more - a blending of the exotic and the proper -

Enjoyed this Dark -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2004-12-15 10:54 AM


susan..ya can't have your cake and jump out of it too...confusious say, she who sit on fence get splinters in her inyourwindows, thanks lady

Susan
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10 posted 2004-12-15 01:48 PM


Ah, but D - I can jump out of the cake, climb back in, jump out, climb in . . . well, you get the picture -

And as for fence sitting - it let's one leg dangle on each side - wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!

And as for splinters - all the more fun to have plucked out

Why don't ya just climb on up?  You might like the fence - unless, of course, it's barbed - owie!

Hehe - messin' witcha!

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2004-12-15 01:58 PM


censored comment
with highly illustrated images
softly painted over
with invisible ink


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12 posted 2004-12-15 01:58 PM


Ah yes that great Japanese art one of my favorites.  You sir, can write this stuff so dang good, yes you do.
Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-12-15 02:14 PM


Mmmm..images of the dance of the seven veils in my mind...
wanna see me dance Dark?

     Season's Greetings!

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2004-12-15 02:19 PM


ms mysteria..
ancient with a new twist or so...thanks and big grin..


___________

lady E...yes bring the veils here please
I wash them in hot water and they shrink into such tiny little items..thanks lady friend

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