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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-15 07:40 AM


The Bean Stalk

I step my steps on every walk
Searching high and low the bean stalk
The one that climbs into the sky
For my wings will not fly that high

Issues made of mental tissue
One that waves the brew of coup
I walk into the dark of mind
And unafraid for I am blind

I tap my cane of five senses
Irregardless of expenses
I pay my way each day a pinch
And it eats me up inch by inch

But since there’s no alternative
It’s that or be vegetative
And so I’d climb into the sky
On bean stalks that would catch my eye

The end of which I’ll someday find
If the chaos will be so kind


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-12-15 07:47 AM


Sort of melancholy but yet so very beautiful Sey. Well done sir.  Good morning.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-12-15 08:45 AM


Excellent morning read Sy!
Lets climb together up to the sky.
~Morning hugs and special tea today, Nancy~

     Season's Greetings!

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-12-15 08:50 AM


Sy, you are a candle in the night, a breath of fresh air, a moonbeam lighting the sea and PIP's message man from Florida....Happy Wed. Sir Knight!

smiles and hugs....wishing you and Randy a very Merry....now go kiss like teenagers...hehehe

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4 posted 2004-12-15 09:01 AM


Nope, I cannot see you as a vegetatin' punkin'. Nor can I see you with a cane. You have wings on your back and you don't even realize it! You can fly to the top of the tallest beanstalk! ~ Up, up, and awaaaay!

Loveya, Mr. T.!
EA

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5 posted 2004-12-15 09:06 AM


I tap my cane of five senses
Irregardless of expenses
I pay my way each day a pinch
And it eats me up inch by inch

But since there’s no alternative
It’s that or be vegetative
And so I’d climb into the sky
On bean stalks that would catch my eye

~*~

Bringing the water can,
some extra beans,
and I'm sure we can look in the alley
and find enough fertilizer
to keep those beanstalks high, and mighty!






Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-12-15 09:39 AM




good luck to all us climbers.  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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7 posted 2004-12-15 02:36 PM


I am not that fond of vegetative myself there Sy, so know what you mean.  Wish we had control of our destiny sometimes.
Susan
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8 posted 2004-12-15 02:59 PM


when you find the bean stalk, let me know, I've always wanted to see the view from up there

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
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9 posted 2004-12-15 04:28 PM


Sy,
   Catchy phrase!

   "Issues made of mental tissue"  


      miscellanea

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2004-12-15 04:47 PM


I tap my cane of five senses
Irregardless of expenses
I pay my way each day a pinch
And it eats me up inch by inch

But since there’s no alternative
It’s that or be vegetative
And so I’d climb into the sky
On bean stalks that would catch my eye
=============================

Youre my favorite kind of bean
Have fun on your trip..take lots of pics.


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11 posted 2004-12-16 03:38 PM


You make great sense with this Sir,  but if
I were not sure,  I would almost say our
Knight is a tad under the weather.  I hope
not...

Ericc
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12 posted 2004-12-16 04:09 PM


What a great combination of lyrical flow and deep content!

Eric

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13 posted 2004-12-17 12:44 PM



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14 posted 2004-12-17 08:05 PM


Wow...nicely written...enjoyed this tons!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Martie
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15 posted 2004-12-17 08:10 PM


Sy

Thinking of you now...cruising and snoozing...you are a wonder!  

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