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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-14 10:06 PM



tomorrow will be another dawn
with toothache attention
to the yawning sun

I will replay the memory
of your voice when it was wet
on my tongue

like a left over kiss
from a starving tray
served with fingertip warmth

we will touch our eyes again
glossy on glassy stares
and feel the texture there

of wishful recognition
and then we will pretend
there are not strings

on our both hands guitar
______________

Dark

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A Tone of Voice
Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287

1 posted 2004-12-14 11:17 PM


brevity, created with just the right flavor creates something to savor again and again.....Mmmm, good!

Atov~


Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-12-15 06:35 AM



Strummmmm away....

babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
3 posted 2004-12-15 06:54 AM


of wishful recognition

**niiiice***

**babygirl**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-12-15 06:58 AM


And now the end is near
And so I face the final curtain,
My friends, I'll say it clear,
I'll state my case of which I'm certain.
I've lived a life that's full, I've travelled each and evr'y highway
And more, much more than this, I did it my way.

Paul Anka

Darlin....it now becomes the beginning of a new relationship...not the end...savor and learn

Your words are indeed, magnificant

Hugs

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2004-12-16 08:40 AM


strum me too
(please)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-12-16 09:45 AM


how did I almost miss this....

I can hear you strummin now..

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