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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-12-14 01:58 PM


Love, hath I forgotten since thee disappeared?
That look… that touch… forgotten I have not-
for all before that date, by law hath adhered-
to laws of perfection, yet love had not.

What can be said of love that doth not offend?
For none doth compare to that of being loved,
yet for love, and beauty, these words, I must send,
in hopes these words, of thy love for thee proved.

So great is thy love these words I must proclaim
for thy love lives upon my beating breast,
and beneath it, love’s passions are in flame-
for not even death could put this heart at rest.

Celestial sins amongst thy lover’s eyes,
brings forth magical realms so they are near,
for I know none above in star lightened skies,
could justify the passion I hold dear.

What precious jewel or metal does not disgrace?
For they fail in duty to represent,
the brilliance, the beauty, upon thy face,
only love to thy beauty may ascent.

What comes from thy virgin lips of devotion?
But pure ecstasy, beauty, love… exposed,
exposed to love’s flawless hymn of emotion-
a piece, only two lovers could have composed.

Love, have I forgotten thee?  Nay I know thee,
for love lost has revived this heart of mine,
and that is why love, listen to this plea
I pray someday love may again be thine!


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-12-14 11:27 PM


A joy to read...James
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