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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Winter has come, tans fade but I still burn brown these eyes pick up gold and leave the green of envy for those who wear it far more beautifully than I You were always handsome in the colors of December my love, no matter how much you loathed snow after all, there is a quiet beauty in the bare of trees For certain, spring breeds new with perfection but as they say, "youth is often wasted on the young" and you, my love give me chills... ~tier |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This is absolutely perfect. I mean it. Excellent imagery and analogies, and excellent message. Great! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
You were always handsome in the colors of December my love, no matter how much you loathed snow after all, there is a quiet beauty in the bare of trees ~*~ indeed, nude trees show such grace of limb... Excellent, Tier... I have missed your words. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness, this is exquisite. Placing it gently into my library. hugs, Chris Don't forget my presents!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You were always handsome in the colors of December my love, no matter how much you loathed snow after all, there is a quiet beauty in the bare of trees For certain, spring breeds new with perfection but as they say, "youth is often wasted on the young" and you, my love give me chills..." Oh Tier!! This is exquisite!! I love it! ...therefore I'm keeping it!  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I felt the chills. Great writing! Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
beautiful my friend... simply beautiful |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'm with Ron on this.. Nothing short of beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Alyssa, Catrina, Chris, Nancy, Eric, Ron, Ed, and James, thank you all so much for such inspiring comments.  to you all!~tier |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW! Just Wow. This gave me chills.... but in a good way. YAY! it's a  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your carress with your words. They tingle!  Don't be such a stranger! Warm, welcome-back hugs, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolute perfection Tier....this is so lovely! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
BEAUTIFUL write!!!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful good to read you again |
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