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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-12-14 10:41 AM

You are my heart
A place in the west
Sacred writings with wings
Metaphysical libraries
Joining aphorisms
Have you spoken with Grace?
Who are the Pagans?
Starts for the mind
Where the soul meets the heart
Who can say without reason?
Absurd, the shine that waves
Yet returns…..
Counseling
Light verses
By the unstable glow of light
In the mainline
Winding up the world
Like a top
Ready to spin for the child
Designer programs
By some source of managed care
Which never stops turning

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2004-12-14 10:47 AM

now there is a mouthful
of hymns
while whistling
enjoyed this ms leej

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-12-15 10:22 AM

You are my heart
A place in the west
Sacred writings with wings

I like this very much, dear lady! *S*

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2004-12-15 01:09 PM

The immages are powerful! I liked this a lot! Keep it up!!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-12-15 03:02 PM

Very Nice -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

5 posted 2004-12-15 03:17 PM

This deserves read at least three times before daring to respond. It's that erudite (learned but too the word from which rude came from which fits nicely with aphorism "A tersely phrased statement of a truth or opinion") But you crossed no line that would offend and your message was soft.

While you may have had a personal meaning to the "western heart," such a thing would mean you are facing north which suggests hope.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-12-15 04:07 PM

Lee,
   It's nice to be here again, reading your poetry.  You always catch me with the imagery, sending me into my own little world momentarily.  This really struck a chord with me.

   "Winding up the world
Like a top
Ready to spin for the child"

        miscellanea

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