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0 posted 2004-12-13 09:56 PM




some nights I whine

and the wine flows
from glass to lips
perhaps to the hips
but I don't give a damn
about the hips
though they are still fairly slim
after all the years
after all the tears
and the chaos of life that sometimes
pulls at the seams

so if I sometimes whine,

blame it on the wine
though truth be told,
even the water
flows the same

when the sky is blue I can feel great
when it rains,
well,
hell's only a step away

until I remember
the spring flowers that will bloom

because of the rain

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-13 10:05 PM


and a toast to to whine and wine on lips and hips, and nah, its only about l20 a glass, ive checked.

drink up drink up
let me fill your cup
with the promise of a man

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2 posted 2004-12-13 10:08 PM


LOL,
ok, sister goddess

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3 posted 2004-12-13 10:10 PM


Smile.

It does make my french doors look better.





yer a doll.

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4 posted 2004-12-13 10:11 PM



*clink*  Here's to you Kacy!

     Season's Greetings!

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5 posted 2004-12-13 10:11 PM


LOL, you still working on those damn doors?
I'll drink another glass for you m'dear, to help you finishem' off.

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6 posted 2004-12-13 10:12 PM


hey Nanc, thanks! clink clink
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7 posted 2004-12-13 10:47 PM


Better Come Drink Wine with Me

1.

Don’t go hide in the deep mountains—
you’ll only come to hate it.
Your teeth will ache with the chill of dawn water,
your face smart from the bite of the night frost.
Go off fishing and winds will blow up the cove;
return from gathering firewood to find snow all over the cliffs.
Better come drink wine with me;
face to face we’ll get mellowly, mellowly drunk.

2.

Don’t go off and be a farmer—
you’ll only make yourself miserable.
Come spring and you’ll be plowing the lean soil,
twilight and it’s time to feed the skinny ox.
Again and again you’ll be hit for government taxes,
but seldom will you meet up with a year of good crops.
Better come drink wine with me;
together we’ll get quietly, quietly drunk.

3.

Don’t go climbing up to the blue clouds—
the blue clouds are rife with passion and hate,
everyone a wise man, bragging of knowledge and vision,
flattening each other in the scramble for merit and power.
Fish get chowdered because they swallow the bait;
moths burn up when they bumble into the lamp.
Better come drink wine with me;
let yourself go, get roaring, roaring drunk.

4.

Don’t go into the realm of red dust—
it wears out a person’s spirit and strength.
You war with each other like two horns of a snail,
end up with one ox-hair worth of gain.
Put out the fire that burns in your rage,
stop whetting the knife that hides in a smile.
Better come drink wine with me;
we’ll lie down peacefully, merrily, merrily drunk.


Po Chü-i


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8 posted 2004-12-13 10:52 PM


LOL, yanno John, Po Chu-i is one of my all time favorite poets? And I'd have been happy to drink the whole dang gourdful with him, and spend the day speaking rhyme time.
LOL, thanks for the Po-etic reply.

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9 posted 2004-12-13 10:54 PM


Hi Kacy,
Here's to you, Lady!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-12-13 10:59 PM


Hey, Ethel, good to see you waving in here!
Hoping all is well in passionate FL.

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