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Lessons from Frances (the introduction)
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Lessons from Frances (the introduction) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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My she was just beautiful ringlets blonde and perfect skin pink of peaches blushing there framed by golden mane well cared. She wore linen suits to school designers were her language art I thought her manicure was French but no, she simply buffed them thus natural a beauty queen and she was standing next to me blue jeans showed my skin at knees and nipples boasted of no bra. I sighed. Hoping that she wouldn't speak I dropped the frames from off my head covering my eyes in dread-- the art invisibility and sure enough she spoke to me "I wish that I could be like that" nodding at my chest --I froze. I wondered if she really spoke the words I thought she'd said. "Mine are just too big" and yes, A double "D" was my best guess so I just nodded silently, for what was there to say? "Would you scratch my back?" she asked, "underneath the strap" she begged. So I did, at her request wondering if big tits were just another burden women blessed, optimistically. I'd never felt like one of them I eyed them with suspicion when "they" had deigned to talk to me so I just stood silently and scratched her perfect back. "Thanks" she smiled a blinding light Jeeeeeezus but her teeth were white I guess I looked taken aback because she nodded, "porcelain" tapping on her pearls. "Do you speak?" she taunted me so I said "woof" sarcastically as her laughter peeled like church bells of blessed Italy. I heard her offer, then, her name in greet. "Frances" swept me off my feet as we kept odd company through the sophomore year. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A series? Oh pleeease?!!! This has to be! Your words drew me in and held me till the last second. I think I was a lot like this, shy, not fitting in... Oh Ser..please do tell us more of Frances. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Quite an introduction and amusing, anecdotal ice-breaker. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
::smiling:: indeed ma'am.. indeed they beg the pages of a book... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh I know it's Christmas now!!!!! how you can tell a story... and I am thankful.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh "gleeeeee".... a Serene One story!! Hugs to you for this. Chrislane  Don't forget my presents!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity You write with such charm....I loved this!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
omg, this is priceless! we must have more  yes, more, more of this damn, you are just so good with setting the scene, speaking the dialogue |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hoping that she wouldn't speak I dropped the frames from off my head covering my eyes in dread-- the art invisibility and sure enough she spoke to me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks" she smiled a blinding light Jeeeeeezus but her teeth were white I guess I looked taken aback because she nodded, "porcelain" tapping on her pearls. "Do you speak?" she taunted me so I said "woof" sarcastically as her laughter peeled like church bells of blessed Italy. I heard her offer, then, her name in greet. "Frances" swept me off my feet as we kept odd company through the sophomore year. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and best of all...she does it assonance and rhyme... yeeeeeeessss...... keep em comming...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Frances" you keep me in wonder... meanwhile... P.S. keeps notes... and she cannot wait for more. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
oh my... look what I found reading on... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Only you... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yup, only you.....incredible! You spin me out.... and that's a good thing  M into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, lookey here...A SereneOne Stooooooory!!! And, where are the other parts, my lady???? Here I go searching....  Love ya, Karen!! Huggers, Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling... and loving this... running off to read the rest...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"Do you speak?" she taunted me so I said "woof" sarcastically as her laughter peeled like church bells of blessed Italy. I can just see... and hear. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she begged. So I did, at her request wondering if big tits were just another burden women blessed, optimistically. i had my own frances her name was debra we both wore silver smiles and pimples then bloomed bit tits at the same time we shopped for bras and tried them on together stuffing our big tits in little girl size cups helping eachoter in one dressing room we blushed and giggled and made believe it was silly, but i know she liked it as much as i did thanks for the reminder again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know I will read them all and cherish them |
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