Just rescue me the way I am

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Open Poetry #34

Just rescue me the way I am

MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2004-12-13 09:38 AM

Its over
I wont apologise
Just rescue me the way I am
Feelings
Subside
From you I could never hide
Help me
Flee
From this existence
Its over
I wont apologise
Just rescue me the way I am

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-12-13 03:19 PM

you've said this perfectly

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2004-12-14 01:32 AM

http://www.wayward-volvo.org/xanthe/atwood.html

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-12-14 10:52 AM

Been there.
Hated it.
Hope it is better for you.

Great poem. Perfectly spoken,

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-18 09:40 AM

okay

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-12-18 02:44 PM

Agreed - this is perfectly written!

~Alli~

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