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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 12-12-2004 10:11 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


All the dancing
dreams
of days to come
Those pleasant sunny afternoons
by the pale blue sea

Flowers that summer
spread across the field
Smell of lilacs
in the hall

Winter castles in the park
Autumn birches
on the hill

All distilled
to a single roomó

roses splashed
on pitted walls


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ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


1 posted 12-13-2004 12:57 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Beautiful images.

Quite the ending. Not sure where you're going with it but it evokes all sorts of ideas backed by images.


Eric
Huan Yi
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Waukegan


2 posted 12-13-2004 05:12 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi

Eric,

Thank you.

This thing, apropos the daughters, was written after re-reading:

Nicholas and Alexandra
by Robert K. Massie
ISBN: 0345438310

A sensitive and intimate account of the last Czar
and his family.  Excellent book, (buy it used at
Amazon cheap).


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Susan Caldwell
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since 12-27-2002
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Florida


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"All distilled
to a single roomó

roses splashed
on pitted walls"

Well done!

Remember the rumors that one of the girls lived?  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

A Tone of Voice
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since 07-18-2001
Posts 294


4 posted 12-13-2004 10:28 AM       View Profile for A Tone of Voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Tone of Voice

These images are certainly provoking, they live! Well done Haun Yi!
Drauntz
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nice.
 
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