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just beyond 33 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you put your fingers to your lips a shhh in pretend with those thoughts behind when I talked about the good times quite a few a night sometimes and how the sunshine feels when nothing else is on something about 33 and how we save up after for another time when we can let it all run out you said that watching horses made you feel that way and your eyes felt warmest before they blazed and now today is here and you have those veils around your wrists and you hope it lasts long enough to make some lovely scars __________ Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you know...those thoughts are never far behind... a soft write this morning, enjoyed M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you said that watching horses made you feel that way and your eyes felt warmest before they blazed ~*~ This is beyond more than 33... and everyone should admire the beauty of the equine...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs thank lady friend __________________ ms sunshine do they know our thoughts when we watch them run thanks lady |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I believe as they run, they know ... oh yes, they know. Excellent write. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at the eyes... what do you think?  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this and the part you brought in about the horses. My neighbor recently bought a horse. He has him in a fenced place very near where I live. I talk to him a lot and he is getting to know me now. Yesterday he saw me go to the mail box and ran up to the fence so that I would talk. Animals have so much sense, don't they? Hugs, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There isn't a moment quit like riding your horse bareback, with only reins to guide him...feeling that burst of power and muscle underneath, the quiver and desire to run with the wind, mane slapping your face...you hunch down, next to his withers, with nothing but your knees holding you on, you grap a handful of mane in your hands, laying your head close to his neck, and like a shot, he's off, hoofs beating in time, faster and faster, as if there were nothing could hold you back...faster, the sound of his nostrals taking in and blowing out with ease, the pa boom, pa boom of his strength almost leaving the ground....you feel his excitement, his freedom, his happiness, you are one with the wind. This reminded me of my white horse, Mr. Brick...he was a marvelous steed, 18 hands high, thick white mane flowing down past his neck, every muscle in his body, excentuated, with a heart to match. He is indeed a lovely memory and was a faithful friend....thank you D. for this....even though, it wasn't your intention, see the marvelous happiness poems bring to people's hearts, even though, your words might mean something else? Incredible how nature works....what a lovely first read this morning.... I'll shut up now..hehe |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
love the way your mind... tunnels... lol... niiice ride, dark man... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol... just remember the nickname I picked... you are not only a pleasure to read but also a wonder to contemplate..  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your poem brings to mind my dad, who loved to go to the track, and would take little me with him, because I loved horses. I felt very important, because I was with him, and because there were no other little girls around, just me with my eyes on high! Thanks!  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Love this!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...I could go on here, but I won't just know it's good |
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