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Neeraja
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0 posted 2004-12-12 04:36 AM



Mijn liefste lief,

There are no magic words I can speak...
there is nothing I can do...
to melt away the miles between us...
like fresh snow in the sun...

The only thing that is big enough
to cross the ocean
and all the miles between us
is my love for you...

So... I trust my love
In the hands of an Angel
To deliver it... without delay...
straight to your heart....

just in time for Christmas...

© Copyright 2004 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-12 04:43 AM


Angels never let you down

they are better than UPS

Margherita
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2 posted 2004-12-12 05:53 AM


How very lovely!

On wings of love, the messages fly in total security and swiftness.

Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-12-12 06:19 AM



While I welcome you "home"
with open arms
I know the time you spend with us
is because you're
without his charms...



Welcome home - if only for a little while, Neeraja...


*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-12-12 11:15 AM


Omg this write is amazing!! I'm adding this to my library!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Neeraja
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5 posted 2004-12-12 12:03 PM


Thanks Passing Shadows,Margherita,Ally and Sunshine, for all your nice comments, and Sunshine... I feel I have neglected my 'home', but Artist and I have so little time together that when he is here with me we enjoy every second of the 3 months out of 12, we are together. And after he leaves it takes a long time for me to climb out of my shell again. It feels so good not to be forgotten by my family here.

Thanks  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-12-12 12:26 PM


Neeraja
A soft lovely write.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-12-12 12:47 PM


A love like yours transcends all earthly  and oceanic bounds!

Good to read your words again! ~ and to be able to see your charming face!


EA

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-12-12 02:21 PM


I like your words

Yes

Dave

vandana
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9 posted 2004-12-12 04:48 PM


nice write
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-12-13 11:19 PM


Lovely...James
Sunshine
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11 posted 2004-12-14 08:33 AM


quote:
Artist and I have so little time together that when he is here with me we enjoy every second of the 3 months out of 12

I know...and I understand...

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-12-14 09:37 AM


This was total sweetness!

Enjoyed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

GG
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13 posted 2004-12-14 10:56 AM


Very sweet! But sad, too... wishingt you could be together.
Yep, your love will get there.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
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14 posted 2004-12-14 12:49 PM


how beautifully written and expressed
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