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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-12-11 05:19 PM


Light electric you give me shivers

The light dancing on my arms
As you move towards me
The electric of your dress sparkles
Your swirl to tease me
Our room is basic
And so are you
But the light in you
The love in you
Leaves me in heaven
Without movement you move the world
With eyes
The world is yours at a glance
You move your hips
And destroy my thoughts
You know you have me
And what’s more I know you do
You take my head and explode it
Until I know only you
Then you smile
If love is this
Then how can we keep the emotion
We burn as we touch
And in our lives exists one
And that one loves



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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2004-12-11 05:24 PM


Electric words that bring your feeling to life. Well done...

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