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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-12-11 08:47 AM


In a moment set aside for sleep,
When in shadows dreams creep,
Bottles broke on bricks walls,
Sirens sound responding to calls
And in time the disturbance pass
Leaving for the broom broken glass.

Gloom



© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-12-11 08:56 AM


Professor,
LOL it happens every time, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-12-11 09:51 AM


must be Scary sometimes...the most noise I get here to wake me is truck traffic vibrations or teenagers revving their engines
on this corner...

M

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-12-11 10:16 AM


I've thrown a few bottles in my time, I admit
A Tone of Voice
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4 posted 2004-12-12 06:56 PM


leaving for the broom broken glass.....that made me smile, for some reason.

Atov~

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
5 posted 2004-12-14 08:07 AM


Hey Mr. Gloomy!

Who sweeps up the glass?

*yawn* for me it's clawing kitties...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2004-12-14 08:13 AM


I can't sleep either.
Well done.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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