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ethome
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0 posted 2004-12-11 08:17 AM



She was cherry lipped sweet
She was built like my ol guitar
She became my fan friend because..
She came to me with such homest warmth.
She spoke with sultry solutions to intimacy
She opened her heart and expressed her inner feelings
She said she was an agnostic
She said she was dyslexic
She said she hadn't slept all night becuse
She said she was also an insomniac....
She was so beautiful but such honest confessions painted an image in my mind....


Are you ready for this.........
All I could picture was someone that stayed up all night and wondered if there was a dog!


Just me I guess....~g~


Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-12-11 12:42 PM


LOL
I've stayed up many nights, but never wondering about dogs.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-12-11 01:19 PM


ethome
A lap dog maybe? LOL

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-11 02:13 PM


neat write
ethome
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4 posted 2004-12-11 04:01 PM


Just a little humor Midnite and I thank you for tuning in for a moment to read this.

Sy maybe a lap you might be right...LOL!

Thanks Passing for the read and the response.


Eric

Startime55
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5 posted 2004-12-11 05:53 PM


LOL...what a delightful read...You paint a picture that leaves the reader laughing as they read your words again and again...

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2004-12-11 10:08 PM


*chuckling*

thank you Eric, for the smile



Happy Holidays sweets!

ethome
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7 posted 2004-12-11 11:44 PM


Startime
What a nice delight. I haven't heard from you in a long time. Glad you could get a little laugh out of this....

Eric

ethome
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8 posted 2004-12-11 11:46 PM


Celeste

Happy holidays to you too.
Thanks for the sweets gift.

Eric

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