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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2004-12-11 08:09 AM



no I have not changed
so don't be tempted
to be a lady again

the windows are open
and the doors too
the watchers stand there

with the sun behind
their voyeur
waiting for a dancer

and I am the music
vulgar notes erectly
sucked from the ends

of my daydream instrumental

______________
dark


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with you
1 posted 2004-12-11 10:06 AM


ahha yes...and your music is awesome...
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-12-11 10:18 AM


nice
*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-12-11 10:32 AM


Very nice!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

ethome
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4 posted 2004-12-11 11:10 AM


Interesting write!

Lots of implications within.

Enjoyable.


Eric

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
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Ohio
5 posted 2004-12-11 02:00 PM


that's how i like it.
straight up, with or without a twist

Susan
Member Ascendant
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-12-11 07:32 PM


poignant, this - sometimes a sonata or a waltz is heard - and that's okay too -

  Susan

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Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-12-12 06:50 AM



Flute...no...

Oboe...

hmm...

music, surely....

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-12-13 06:58 AM


I suppose that's where the cliche came from

You are music to the ears

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