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Huan Yi
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Against a white sky

On a blue horizon

A black ship
Is sailing
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Move the 'A' up a line and you've a haiku. When that black ship sinks we all get wet.
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Nice!

Perfect, actually
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perfectly done!
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Nicely written!

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the color of the lense is worng.

good and still good.
 
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