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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-10 06:03 PM


Hedging feverish attempts at establishing relationships

We were music for thousands conducted by a hedge conductor feeling images working the shape of garden shears deciding differentials

As images entwined to entomb

A landscaping environment

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this makes me think of spring...and all the old loves, becoming new again very much enjoyed
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Wow Dave...i like this alot...

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4 posted 2004-12-11 11:18 AM


Dave

Good metaphors for the growth within this piece.


Eric

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5 posted 2004-12-11 04:10 PM


Thanks.

I was trying to look at how we take innocent steps in what we feel are secret yet fail to realise that everyone has been there before and the reason the hedge was there, which was the starting point of clumsiness in relationships was because the owner got fed up with seeing courting couples on the only half height wall around.

Dave

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