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Upon awakening
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Upon awakening |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Upon awakening Hurried steps through gray purple gauze shroud clinging to these limbs green bills hanging from willows leaves blown by gentle wind vines impeding movement voices echoing, encouraging where is the glass to either mirror or view the air is cold, crisply shivering anticipation a hand to my back gentle force pressing direction needful of finding whatever this dream holds in store… waterfalling timepiece forcing eyelashes to untwine I want the reverie I will find my pillows again. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-10-2004 11:39 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good thoughts, good write, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved that ending *sigh* have a great day, lady Sunshine |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes lady, you deserve a much needed rest.... well done K. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful. *S* And yes... I love the ending! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Things have been happening so fast for you.. You will find those pillows and curl up in time. Right now, just remember to 'breathe'. Hugs~N. ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely, as usual |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "needful of finding whatever this dream holds in store…" I think if you stand still for a minute, the dream will come to you.  |
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