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~DreamChild~
Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-10 12:26 PM


you think reality
is being happy
with no wants
and no needs
or pain,
or strife...


but in reality,
reality
is pain.

you suffer
you bleed
you work...
you fret for something
you may never see

or have
or feel.

pursuit of happiness is
pursuit of vanity.


in reality
there is only truth.
and truth hurts.


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-12-10 06:43 AM


Reality can be extremely tough and painful …. and your poem shows this very powerfully. Sometimes we are in such a mood … Much depends on our attitude towards the world and people. Pursuit of happiness is our birth right, I feel, but happiness does not depend on material things where vanity is implied. It resides in the core of our heart, at peace with the world.

There are truths that hurt and there are truths that are a source of deep joy.

Thank you for sharing these thought provoking words.

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-12-10 08:22 AM


I happen to agree with you

well said!

~DreamChild~
Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
3 posted 2004-12-10 11:56 AM


thank you marg, for expounding, and understanding.
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