Three Vignettes - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #34

Three Vignettes

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-12-09 11:55 PM

Camp Orchestra

Violins in the night
playing a symphony devoid of sound-
drowned out by the hiss
of escaping gas.

Camp Garden

What flowers grew in Dachau’s soil
while whistles of once filled trains
pierced the night of nearby houses-
as inhabitants slept in mindless slumber.

745218

Ashes rose as wisps of pungent fingers
escaping on a westerly wind-
nine miles outside of Munich
there was but one path to freedom
for a man with no name.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-12-09 11:58 PM

Nice writing...James

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2004-12-10 12:07 PM

http://osf1.gmu.edu/~lsmithg/deathfugue.html

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-12-10 04:40 AM

Wow Tim, that was great work! Happy Holidays to you and your fine lady as well while I a in your house.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-10 09:56 AM

much enjoyed these!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-12-10 10:14 AM

I cannot even begin to explain
the chills that went through me
with these.

We must never forget!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.