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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-12-09 10:32 PM



To tame unappreciative dispositions
away away misjudged recognitions
dealt in hypocritical employs
my missile defense deployed

When a gift goes undelivered
and unwanted company quivers
why remain to receive cold shoulder
react positively, one grows bolder

Shed a skin of resentment
don a coat of endowment
impede currents of rude indifference
open sluices to provoked inference

disrespect in the form of indifference
begets a heathy return of same substance..
eye for eye, tooth for a tooth
why pretend to hold a head aloof
one can't feign attention constantly
if one wants to be noticed in return...
spoiled gifts will occur much less
one would be happier, to confess


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-09-2004 11:14 PM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-12-10 09:54 AM


Martin, I never quite looked at this perspective, I enjoyed this presentation
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
2 posted 2004-12-10 01:58 PM


Hey Martin,
  I like this one.
It makes me think.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

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