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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-12-09 08:21 PM



You seen me and took my soul
cushioned my heart with love
and compassion,Never would I
thought anyone but you could
give me this passion


Days dragged on time seem to stand
still,I counted the secs untill I
got to see you. I arrived in your
arms like I pictured I would

No one ever understood
just you and I together
again,nothing else mattered


Went back home to a dark
and lonely bed sobing in the
sheets wishing I was dead
wanting you by my side

How foolish I was to trust
you I thought you loved me


Let's face it I was just
another one of your great
conquest nothing more
nothing less and nothing
no one just a pursue

Fact is your the one that
sabataged you,to be lucky
enough to have a girl love
you and let her slip away

That my freind is something
youl always pay.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
1 posted 2004-12-09 10:55 PM


so what do you all think
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-12-10 12:00 PM


Nice writing...James
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