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My Echo
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My Echo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Echo My echo flies each step I take It circles a diminish wake A lesser stir the force of tide Eternity of self divide It powders into finer dust To touch upon the next entrust And I would like to think a goal Perhaps to shape a human soul But in the constant of the flow We lose the weaving of the sow And cannot stand the enzyme lime That grinds each stage in passing time Although we heir the storm and fair In all the wind and air of wear We are in truth a passing phase A baking cake that waits a glaze And so I’ll pass around the bend Passing to an endless end |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It powders into finer dust To touch upon the next entrust And I would like to think a goal Perhaps to shape a human soul well, sir, you have certainly placed many golden ripples all over my life To know you is a gift... Lovely morning wake up call |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
VERY (very very very)...LOVELY (lovely lovely lovely)ECHO (echo echo echo)of a poem Mr. Psai....as usual |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Thank you, thank you, thank you. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Enjoyed the Co-op LOL Good morning sweet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning Sir Echo.... Loved this write and the banter made me smile. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nice to read with my coffee this morning...  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Although we heir the storm and fair In all the wind and air of wear We are in truth a passing phase A baking cake that waits a glaze ~*~ make that glaze of whipped cream, and you'll have a baker's dream...   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed this morning Sey. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
And so I’ll pass around the bend Passing to an endless end Not yet you won't !!!  Can't go round the bend yet as you have still so many poetic offerings for all of us. I just know it! hugs to you Seymour. Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Glad you liked, have a good one. Susan, Thank you susan.  Sunshine Good Idea, Hugs and Gentle, Thank you dear. Chris, You are a sweetheart. Big hug |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pass on, yes! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and you beat the cake!  Your glaze does amaze! Loveya! EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We are in truth a passing phase A baking cake that waits a glaze Now is that ever the truth Sy Nicely worded. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And so do you my earth angel. Sharon, You are an amazing women. |
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