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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-12-09 07:14 AM


Will we cross the bridge?
Where age surfaces?
You’re molding me like topiary
Seasonal dormancy
Lusting dreams
Skip round the corner
To see prophecies
Gulps of flute sounds
Morphine glues
Calling everything tangerine
Going to dive in with me?

Losing seat belt feelings
Following the evening
Garnished with Chambord
Tasting light on your subliminal stones
Licking every condiment
Under your soft rainbow
Signifies everything
Theme park universe
Giant flaming mantras
Quenching thirst
Under skin, radiation, of which
there's no cure for......

Inside a crimson path of hunger
Innuendos of dawn’s questions
The ones only you and I
Know the answers to...

Wings pure sound
Opening voids where
Unbelievable becomes firm
I’m dying to touch your life arrangements
Ones with red roses, spawning buds
Miraculous silhouettes

Sterilized twilight sidewalks
Open up just for us...
Together watching the endless highways
Commingling with night’s velvet sky
you and I....
Spectators of the corn, we are
Learning the motion of an orange moon
Slow blood sugar rises
Finding ourselves
In a white circumstance of grandeur

Natural essay of artistic providence
Swinging on some sky diary
We're writing together
Pouring miracle grow on our church
I asked, “have we far to go”
You smiled, “take as long as you like,
Cuz, we’re a co-op”




© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-12-09 08:07 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweet, enjoyed the Co-op. It would be nice. LOL You are really something.


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-12-09 08:17 AM


mind bend blend spend
pretty pinata
with her bangles
and a pink ribbon


you do suggest such pleasures

enjoyed it ms

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-12-09 09:11 AM


Yes...the innuendos...

very nice LeeJ!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2004-12-09 10:07 AM


Absolutely charming language weaving! So many favorite lines and phrases in this...unique and original in feel.FRESH!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-12-09 10:48 AM


You do pen some magical words Lee J.
Excellent write!!

JL

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-12-09 01:40 PM


One of your best Lee

Dave

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