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Open Poetry #34

You...

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-12-09 02:40 AM

I can't get you off of my mind,
You're a one in a million find,
I know that you're a one of a kind.
I can't sleep anymore without you,
I've tried everything what can I do?
I know to me you'll always be true.
Can't eat right any longer,
Loving you makes me weak yet stronger,
Turned me into a starving love monger.
Unhappy when you're away,
In our bed I wait and stay,
To hear you come in and just say "Hey".
I'm not myself without you..
And without you I wouldn't know what to do,
Without you I'm not whole,
You captivate my very soul.
Yes..
Only You...

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-12-09 05:00 AM

Yes. Like it.

Dave

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-12-09 07:40 AM

I'm bound to believe that for every person there is a special one, that no one else could ever come close to completing us, like that one person does...perhaps our twin?

But it certainly does exist and is written as you have done here....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.