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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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In this least little vessel made of love— I’ll finally rest the day I met you dressed in blue that autumn night beneath your stars— the moment I saw you close those eyes placing a hand in mine The way your hair spread in the wind— over the pillow as we lay together under an amber moon Words we said will go as well All I was when you were near— Cast adrift without recourse into a nameless universe Free at last in time’s indifference— and away from harm by lesser gods http://www.kalliope.org/digt.pl?longdid=lawrence2001061776 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes. I like it. Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Words we said will go as well All I was when you were near— ahhh, remembering the way he smelled and sounded as he slept, peaceful, tranquil, with a smile on his face...watching him in the night light, with a glow upon his body glistening in time with the moon, with our time...that moment... Kinda makes life more then worthwhile, doesn't it? Beautifully written and felt. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
very nice... as always. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A Viking's burial with a gentle push. Enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have such a way |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Like dixie said, you have such a way with words.  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
does every poet talk about this at last once in their poet life? |
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