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Huan Yi
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0 posted 12-09-2004 01:01 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


In this least
little vessel
made of love—
I’ll finally rest the day I met you
dressed in blue

that autumn night
beneath your stars—
the moment I saw you close those eyes
placing a hand in mine

The way your hair
spread in the wind—
over the pillow as we lay together
under an amber moon

Words we said
will go as well
All I was
when you were near—

Cast adrift
without recourse
into a nameless universe

Free
at last
in time’s indifference—

and away from harm
by lesser gods


http://www.kalliope.org/digt.pl?longdid=lawrence2001061776

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DavePage
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1 posted 12-09-2004 05:03 AM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

Yes.  I like it.

Dave
LeeJ
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2 posted 12-09-2004 07:27 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Words we said
will go as well
All I was
when you were near—

ahhh, remembering the way he smelled and sounded as he slept, peaceful, tranquil, with a smile on his face...watching him in the night light, with a glow upon his body
glistening in time with the moon, with our time...that moment...

Kinda makes life more then worthwhile, doesn't it?

Beautifully written and felt.
~DreamChild~
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3 posted 12-09-2004 12:25 PM       View Profile for ~DreamChild~   Email ~DreamChild~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~DreamChild~

very nice... as always.
RSWells
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4 posted 12-09-2004 12:46 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

A Viking's burial with a gentle push. Enjoyed
passing shadows
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5 posted 12-11-2004 12:38 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

you have such a way
*Alli4000*
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6 posted 12-11-2004 10:20 AM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Like dixie said, you have such a way with words.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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7 posted 04-28-2007 08:41 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

does every poet talk about this at last once in their poet life?  

 
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