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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-08 08:32 PM


breaking clouds,
and into the sea,
scraping skies,
standing high
above the masses,

I am brave...

barrelling forward;
forceful momentous truth
crumbling
tall mountains
canyons file at my wake.

I am strong...

Slammed.
Stopped
to a hault.
weak and afraid
a bleeding heart.

I am sorry...

I am sorry.



~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-12-08 11:35 PM


Nice...James
whiskey
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Australia
2 posted 2004-12-09 01:30 AM


great writing
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-12-09 07:41 AM


3 very humble words which can change whole perspectives and bandage wounds...


Well done

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams
4 posted 2004-12-09 12:33 PM


Thank you LeeJ.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-12-11 12:43 PM


oh
Copperbell
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6 posted 2004-12-11 11:49 AM


I enjoyed this...but its amazing how much strength a person can have when their heart has healed
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-12-11 01:26 PM


Well said DC.

     Season's Greetings!

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