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Open Poetry #34

Fantasy

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-08 02:32 PM

I followed you
through lands of old
where kings reside
on thrones of gold,

mermaids bathe
in crystal lakes
and elves and fairies
merry-make

in magical forests
of trees so splendid
singing their songs
of cheer never-ending,

and unicorns frolic
in boundless plains.
boisterous dwarf-children
play there, dwarf- games.

beneath lazy, fat clouds
in the summer day's sky
sprites flutter freely
and the pixies fly.

Yes, I chased you forever,
or so it did seem,
through a mystical world
of fantasies and dreams.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-08 02:38 PM

Yes, I chased you forever,
or so it did seem,
through a mystical world
of fantasies and dreams.

ah Derrick, I believe I've been on this same kind of chase before. You write such beautiful images with longing and a hint of sad blended in. Lovely writing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-12-08 03:12 PM

beautifully written and felt

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