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RSWells
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0 posted 2004-12-08 11:21 AM



We breed them

new Sport of Kings,
lineage tracked from
starting blocks of graphs,
culled to the strongest

Strains

wrung, fine tuned to
a tense tightrope of
only what we want,
tauten as Naram Sin’s bow

Isolated,

palatine, privileged, preened,
and kneaded to vainglory as
are Blue Persian Longhairs
by “lion-cuts” and GPS tags

Ignored,

denied or forgotten are those
stretched to notes beyond the
range of our hearing, pulled
like silly-putty comic faces

Distortions

punch-faced Pekinese that yap,
Pit bulls, Dobermans that snap,
Turkeys which will never flap
limits breached always snap

Whoa, woe is we!
  


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-12-08 11:31 AM


Oh, but that is one side of the bacteria story! What about the friendly ones in yoghurt? lol i.e. lactobacillus acidophillus. At least they improve our intestinal environment! lol

Intriguing, tongue-in-cheek write!


Linda

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2 posted 2004-12-08 12:46 PM


"limits breached always snap"

They do but "they" learn from that, and keep trying to create a "mould of perfection" for the perfect, don't they?

Very profound Richard, and one of my pet peeves, as is this today, have a look.
http://www.mytelus.com/news/article.do?pageID=ab_home&articleID=1787729

                        
Let there be peace on earth ~ and let it begin with me

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2004-12-11 06:53 AM


“I believe in the great discovery.
I believe in the man who will make the discovery.
I believe in the fear of the man who will make the discovery. . .

I believe in the burning of his notes,
burning them to ashes,
burning them to the last scrap. . .

I believe in the refusal to take part.
I believe in the ruined career.
I believe in the wasted years of work.
I believe in the secret taken to the grave.

These words soar for me beyond all rules
without seeking support from actual examples.
My faith is strong, blind, and without foundation.”

From: Discovery
by Wislawa Szymborska

RSWells
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4 posted 2004-12-11 12:42 PM


Thank you Earth Angel, Mysteria and Huan Yi
for commenting on a poem that holds some promise as a decent write once I do something about the clumsy last stanza and my addiction to rhyme.

Huan Yi, your considered quotation would have done as well on my other post about the autograph touring crew of the Enola Gay. While I'm not a total luddite (for the internet may yet bring us all together if time allows and certainly enzymes and greater yields of foodstuffs are noble pursuits) I do worry about the data banks of the insurers who would narrow our uniqueness and the always pervasive influence of the war monger/profiteers who've seized most scientific research in order to destroy more and faster.

But science also increasingly reveals and confirms our common "virgin birth" by our mother earth and as time goes on those who steadfastly, and violently maintain the myths intended to control the ignorant of a few thousand years past will be considered the backward of our species...and none too soon.

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