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i danced topless for you
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i danced topless for you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I danced topless for you, bound to my red stilettos with a trimming of filagree a tickle of crimson beneath me, as the breeze blushed me pink, i begged for your eyes knowing i'd look away from you, a quick change of attire, in the smooth of white taffeta on the aisle of communion i wore virginal tresses, simply to throw one more curve at you, the sun lays between us, in an altar of gold atop the ground clad in dark sepia, as i strip to the core and dare you to look at me while i wait for your eyes again, from across this brown dance floor where i'm standing straight up now, regardless of your approval. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Michelle! Great poetic performance, baring your psyche, more than your skin. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
skinsational view here ms inky real meaty content (grin) |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
No doubt a vision that would reduce most men to a mouth breather. Maybe it's the music or Rhett and Scarlet's unfortunate timing. The end of your write is the right way to go, confidently weaning from the inattentive. That's a lively photo, full of life, sun, sunflowers, yellow and green. I believe we'll see that capital 'I' trickle down through future posts to assert itself through all stanzas. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From your photo, Dear Goddess, his approval you most assuredly would receive!!! ~ but his approval is not what is most important ~ it is your own that matters most! ~ and this write shows that you are in the right frame of mind! Sensuous, sultry ~ and free! Exquisite in form! ~ both you and your poetry! lol   Linda P.S. I'd also like to echo Richard's words!  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! Enjoyed the read. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very hot! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Bold and telling this is great. I love the honesty of it. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow....I enjoyed this very much!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
from across this brown dance floor where i'm standing straight up now, regardless of your approval. WOW!!!!
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Little sugar a little spice makes this poem very nice! Enjoyed! Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Michele!! Just....WOW!!! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whew!! This is VERY GOOD, Michelle!!!! Hugs,  |
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