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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-12-08 09:12 AM








In heaven’s light
many miracles occur
to smile down on us

In heaven’s light
Many tragedies occur
Heaven holds us up

Under this, the light
Let me smile within your face
Loving passion’s grace

In heaven’s light
Many passions can be found
For you, there is Me

I will fly in you
Be your wings, carry you through
In heaven’s light



01.25.01

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1 posted 2004-12-08 09:15 AM


This is one I'm glad to be first responder to....since our friend Suthern may be on the way to work now, away from any computers. I'm a poor substitute, but I can say that there are many who care, many more than this dear lady may know, some moved by friendship, some by the heart-tearing poetry she blesses us with, and some by both.

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msflame
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2 posted 2004-12-08 09:18 AM


this is quite beautiful and comforting.
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3 posted 2004-12-08 09:20 AM


Even more beautiful than the poem is the sight of one heart reaching to another, offering compassion and hope.

Thank you for this, Sunshiney One... how appropriate that you should offer light. *S*

Smiling at Ratleader's response... but also shaking my head... for there is no poor substitute when it comes to caring... every bit counts. *S* And... as much as I love her... I rejoice that others love her, too! *S*

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4 posted 2004-12-08 09:37 AM


so extremely beautiful and I know how much she will treasure this lady. She is a special gal.  Hugs to you both.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-12-08 09:53 AM


Beautiful reaching out with such touching words ...

You are light.

Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2004-12-08 10:14 AM


special stuff ms sun
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7 posted 2004-12-08 02:08 PM


This is so special...I know JB will love it.
You have such a caring heart Karilea.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-12-08 02:11 PM


Under this, the light
Let me smile within your face
Loving passion’s grace


for me, that was the trickle of loving passion....outstandingly beautiful!

Martie
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9 posted 2004-12-08 02:19 PM


Karilea/sissie

You are my sunshine!  

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10 posted 2004-12-08 03:04 PM


I will fly in you
Be your wings, carry you through
In heaven’s light

and He speaks through poet's too

thank you lady, I am touched to tears...and hanging on to hope......thank you all for caring for me as you do *jb's best smile*

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