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Open Poetry #34

A Simple Thing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-12-08 07:27 AM

Morning discusses simplicity
Handing out peace vigils
Building orchestras
Like vital staging
Conversations, with endless supply
Served by a national committee
Networking Redwood loyalty
Walking cheerful ministries
Like an adolescent face
Feeling arpeggio
With wonder and richness
Spicy talks...blended images
Simmering classical elegance
Soaring like microbes of some loud gospel choir
Window reflections of simple folks
With an endless carnival entourage

This morning was clear for once here in Pennsylvania
With glimmering diamonds of stars blinking all over velvet sky
Announcing Wednesday, December 8, 2004
Did you see it?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (12-09-2004 09:12 AM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-12-08 08:01 AM

This morning was clear for once here in Pennsylvania
With glimmering diamonds of stars blinking all over velvet sky
Announcing Wednesday, December 8, 2004
Did you see it?

no but i heard it, i woke to an old ronettes song in my head and it was glorious, next time wake me for the stars, i'm one state over

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-12-08 08:04 AM

LeeJ
Wonderful write, enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2004-12-08 08:16 AM

now I see....through the pen window
of the lady that opens mornings

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-12-08 11:10 AM

Cool!

Enjoyed your write Lee J.

JL

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-12-09 10:02 PM

Excellent write dear LeeJ...
You rock.
TD

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 2004-12-09 10:33 PM

Great Write, nice reading thankyou

Julie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-12-10 09:50 AM

ah yes...I saw it

late but better than never

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