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mrmojorisin5908
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since 2004-05-03
Posts 103
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0 posted 2004-12-08 03:13 AM



SORRY EVERYONE I HAVE NOT POSTED IN A WHILE. ENJOY, AND FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE!!

Restraint, pain, found along walking ruins
Cruel molestations of inner conglomerations
A mutant dries blood, sinking away into grey
Circle the path, the feast, the inner beast
Keep the purple tongues sifting through ash

May has come, now is the time
Soil sinking, rising into fond memories
A masquerade of filth
Girl on the wall, climbing tall, shrinking beneath us
Stop:::::: Hide locks, breath air, care to share
Vast desert of vegetation and humiliation

We the people demand a beautiful end
Again we relegate in feasts of orange palms
Strange, a land washed in gardens of lust
Pretend to agitate pain, life, and wild remains
Insanity, the manic child prays to the sky
His core full of agitating abomination

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

© Copyright 2004 Andrew A. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-12-08 10:34 AM


Restraint, pain, found along walking ruins
Cruel molestations of inner conglomerations


Yes!

There is indeed insanity in so many events we observe.

Yet, even in flowers growing around the ruins and wasted land ... we can sip hope.
This world and humanity long to heal.

Love, Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-12-08 11:02 AM


This is great!  Keep posting, enjoyed.

JL

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-12-08 03:11 PM


We the people demand a beautiful end
Again we relegate in feasts of orange palms
Strange, a land washed in gardens of lust
Pretend to agitate pain, life, and wild remains
Insanity, the manic child prays to the sky
His core full of agitating abomination


Amazing word use

Enjoyed

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