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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-12-07 11:19 PM



Down deep, the gulp of endless fathom
Remnants hidden searching outcome
Each grain suspends of trepid waters
Laid to rest her convent quarters
Let to rest and out of sight, lip tight
Shy the touch of tender probe
Discovered ‘neath a sapphire robe
She waits

By loop the knots and to degree
Absorbing tears so tenderly
And tenderly to come the sea
Down deep, and still her remedy
He glistens, in reluctant dives
More capable to reach he strives
To take her hand as time arrives
She waits

So curious by natures wager
Turn to stone the tears that cage her
But his resolve may now dissolve
The torrent cut of passions razor
Down deep, where weary sleep
A lullaby to cry an ocean’s motion
In caveat, tides healing potion
She

Copyright Kkh 11/07/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 2004-12-08 01:31 AM


Excellect write, Very nice to read
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2004-12-08 01:55 AM


Yes, this is a great write!!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-12-08 05:39 AM


wow!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2004-12-08 07:43 AM


perfection glows like the language of come hither...excellent writing!
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-12-08 11:14 AM


This is an excellent write.  But too short!
More!  More!  More!

JL


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2004-12-08 11:43 AM


And tenderly to come the sea
Down deep, and still her remedy
He glistens, in reluctant dives
More capable to reach he strives
To take her hand as time arrives
She waits


Very moving, refined poetry, dear TD!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


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