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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-12-07 08:59 PM



Long
Slender autumn
Evening skies

Cheeks chill reddened
Pale blue eyes

Secrets forbidden
I still listen

Cherish the favor
Remember
And savor

Loving
The stuff of dreams

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-07 10:09 PM


sweet!
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2 posted 2004-12-07 11:38 PM


Seems to me I'm getting to be a fan of yours.....wait a minute while I check.....hmmmmmm......yep, that's what I'm doin'!

Depth without volume, something I respect in a poet.

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whiskey
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3 posted 2004-12-08 01:15 AM


lovely writing
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-12-08 02:22 AM


Enjoyed...James
Paula Finn
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5 posted 2004-12-08 05:21 PM


I, too, am finding myself looking for you whenever I get the opportunity to be here...you always manage to touch me...not something easily done anymore
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6 posted 2004-12-09 09:31 PM


I haven't read one yet without wishing I'd written it. Yep, I'm a fan too! Well done, again, John!
Huan Yi
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7 posted 2004-12-10 12:03 PM


Thank you everyone for the encouragement.

John

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8 posted 2004-12-10 06:03 PM


Very nice write john...enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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9 posted 2007-04-28 08:49 PM


good.
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