Autumn Wind as it will stay

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Open Poetry #34

Autumn Wind as it will stay

DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-07 07:13 PM

Autumn Wind

Opaque your dreams consider mindless dreaming seeking deliverance washed in sweet scant secretions trembling in a window on a night no one remembers

Of the love of heart with peace, loving treasure strewn at your feet for dark nights unmoved by hope, lost in vain, stillborn you strive as Icy winds grip your veins, your thoughts, my needs

Margherita
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1 posted 2004-12-08 09:33 AM

Very impressive visions, dear Dave.

This autumn wind inspired beautiful poetic expressions.

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-12-09 04:54 AM

Margherita

Many thanks.

I've played around with this for a long time and it was almost a song at one time, a baby's soothing rhyme and about a woman with a cold hold.

They were all funnily enough the same thing about Autumn Wind.

regards

Dave

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-11 08:01 AM

sing on Dave!

ethome
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4 posted 2004-12-11 08:04 AM

Metaphorically wonderful stuff!

Eric

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