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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-12-07 06:51 PM

         temptation

                                   time
can be
                     place

     place              time

          as     stems
   tremble
                            toward
         the
               touch

    one
            yellow
                          trumpet
                                      flower
                               bending
                     bending
             down
            to            the
        rose                so
        pink              stiff
                         toward
                       the
                touch
           the
                    touch

            as we
                   tremble
          toward
       the
                     touch
      that
                  cannot
             be

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-07 08:14 PM

Your spacing is "just enough"
to make the stem of the flower
tremble in anticipation...

it must be nice to have flowers
where you are...

we are bare and naked, now...
winter shivered the last of the leaves away...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-12-07 09:33 PM

Jamie

Time is so hard sometimes, or soft...it likes to play with us I think...we think we can bend it to our will, but we can only be, within it.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-07 10:11 PM

ooooooooo, yes...very nice

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2004-12-08 10:58 AM

This is incredibly lovely. *S* Alone, without formatting, your words are beautiful... but... with an artist's touch, you give us a presentation that's visual magic.... I felt myself leaning as I read... as if that would help the blossoms conquer those last few millimeters. *S*

Beautiful work! *S*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-12-08 10:59 AM

Great one James.
Enjoyed.

JL

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