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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-12-07 11:14 AM


Heartbeat burn
Nestles colors
Mystic earthly wonder
Spreads velvet night
Eden grass of “I know”
Captures glitter life

Scattered jewels
Ignites a fire dance
Where lovers fuel
Between romance
Siren turning tight
Shamanic reflectives

Sweet silent thoughts
Bring hands in movement
To feel burning bright
Fire skin
Like healing arts
Transform

Accessing primal forces of life
Energies in meditation
To a new moon
A new you
An every-day us
In Amazon blaze
Survivors of our
Own homepage

Now kiss me, hard, to shut me up....


Dedicated to Yanni....hehe

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-12-07 11:41 AM


I broke out laughing at your unexpected ending! Sorry I can't oblige! You are the wrong gender for my liking! ~ Besides, I'd never want to shut your mouth up! Too much wonderful poetry spills from it and onto the blue pages!


Linda

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2004-12-07 12:22 PM


The ending really is great! After all those clear images and emotions its such a frank request. And I love it!


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-12-08 09:20 AM


An absolutely awesome write, dear Lee!

When you capture such depth of "knowing" you are experiencing oneness at its highest levels and ... a kiss is our perfect, earthly manifestation of this perception.

Library!

Love, Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2004-12-08 10:13 AM


yawn ee?  grin

way cool stuff ms lee j..
am sure he would be impressed


JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-12-08 11:05 AM


HeeHee...

You are so good!

JL


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