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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-12-07 09:43 AM



Once In A Blue...


Something there had caught my eye,
The window out so dismal grey.
Yet there entwined within Crepe Myrtle
Deepest blue of one named Jay.

Watched I did, his action slight,
Searching for, like I, this morn.
Smiling thoughts awaited movement
Reigned upon in dew adorn.

Though slow to move, body aching,
His, I caught, in flight once more.
Incentive mine, December's timing,
A spirit lift, nature's decor...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-12-07 09:47 AM


Nature always has something to offer us even on our grey and achy days. Very nice write Maureen. hugs to you, Chris
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-12-07 10:02 AM


Maureen,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-12-07 12:18 PM


What wonderful images flooded my mind as I read this Maureen.
Lovely this..
Lovely you.
Huigs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-12-07 06:48 PM


a beautiful flight indeed
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5 posted 2004-12-07 08:00 PM


Beautiful write.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Susan
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6 posted 2004-12-07 08:07 PM


very nice

Susan

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passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-12-07 10:10 PM



JL
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8 posted 2004-12-08 07:17 PM


I can almost hear him singing...

JL


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