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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-07 08:46 AM


I noticed your ring later
after someone spent a lot too
to make sure it stood out more
than your bosom or body in jeans

maybe it was those eyes
with their own diamonds
or your hair in the wind
when you said it was warmer

and you like how that feels
or when you looked at my hands
and smiled at my gestures
as you drew them on paper

or that special way you grined
when you said little things
that make your mouth a movie
that a man wants to watch

all the way to the end
___________

Dark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-12-07 08:48 AM



Smiling at you...
looks like you're in "like"...

a lot.

Excellent play here...
with words and all...


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-12-07 08:56 AM


ms sun..
the view from this place
makes it a woman

thank you for the eyes

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-12-07 08:58 AM


Dark,
Enjoyed the play on words, have a good one.



Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-12-07 10:35 AM


I really like this - d - simply lovely - you do have such a gift with words -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-12-07 10:48 AM


all I can say, is I'm in the shadow of your smile today...scrathin like a kitten for everything I can get...smiles and hugs
such beauty!

exceptionAL!

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-12-11 08:11 AM


yeah....this is one of your best, yaknow
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