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To Someone? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Home accounts walk in someone else’s shoes Bound by minds built for change Dollar signs are family ties Confrontational to the game What I wouldn’t give For moonlight sighs When it’s cold outside I’m walkin thru your heavy thoughts Kicking pebbles, wishin you were mine I can breathe without you Unafraid of some things new But, hard faces turn to worn out scowls False imprisonments, you know the ones Endless despairs Hot-headed blame, their High and mighty every days Insecurities….fears Narcotic opinions dogeared So I write a song or two Just to hear the sounds of you And it’s shameful without What inspired tomorrows The vital part of who I am Like our memory’s friend Held captive in your arms What I wouldn’t give For moonlight sighs When it’s cold outside I’m walkin thru your heavy thoughts Kicking pebbles wishin you were mine I watch another world come by Sold-out by all Don’t they know what’s really soul? And sugar to the mind? Take a look around Don’t wave good-bye Remorse is not a spoken word It holsters feelings Petals ever change Falling through the cracks Of another day I’ll never stop believing In rock-hard motions of apology Who lives like this, as time is sprintin? Where violent winds keep flirting With surviving love that says so long? And then one day, your scent walks forever Within the blades of green, green grass Slipin on worn shoe moisture Touchin fates own wineglass Where inner strength roots So closely disheveled What could have beens Coming in waves Along the shore of lambskin What I wouldn’t give For moonlight sighs When it’s cold outside I’m walkin thru your heavy thoughts Kicking pebbles, wishin you were mine What fears have I, that’s impossible to stop It’s me you’ll never find Through our lonely ripples of time |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j got a moon color lens for my REI 1,000,000 candle power lamp and an all night pass to the disney world grand canyon wanna come along? enjoyed this soft side of you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I can breathe without you Unafraid of some things new But, hard faces turn to worn out scowls False imprisonments, you know the ones Endless despairs Hot-headed blame, their High and mighty every days Insecurities….fears Narcotic opinions dogeared Lee this is simply and amazing write. I am keepin' this one! I want to read it again and again, because I think I have lived this poem. Awesome. hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Just think positive and you will find the rainbows treasure. Have a happy. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
LeeJ Beautiful!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ Such amazing images you find and you never seem to run out...you better not!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lady I love your use of imagery! Well done gal. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What I wouldn’t give For moonlight sighs When it’s cold outside I’m walkin thru your heavy thoughts Kicking pebbles wishin you were mine Oh, lady... these lines came from your pen... but I think you read my heart. *S* Yes... exactly this. *S* Excellent write!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! Nice work Lee J. JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"What I wouldn’t give For moonlight sighs When it’s cold outside I’m walkin thru your heavy thoughts Kicking pebbles, wishin you were mine" ~ I suppose that many of your readers will have experienced those same feelings at one time or another. I now am of the mind, that what is meant to be ~ will be... Beautifully expressive writing. Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the bluesy feel to this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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