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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-05-2005 05:47 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi

                    
                         In the endó
                    a fat old woman
                         feeding her dog
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-05-2005 06:21 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

smile

I'm not sure if I want you to reincarnate as an old fat woman or a dog--

and either would be redundant.

(That was my mean response and somehow I think you can take it.)

But I did enjoy this, and woof and moan, either way, it hit too close to home.

(can I smile now?)

sheesh.

Tell me you have a sense of humor...???

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serenity blaze

Oh yes, this is intended very much
to be open to interpretation as the reader sees fit.

Glad you read it.

Thank you.

John

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Glad you wrote it.

Thank you.

Karen



(it may not have showed but I really liked this)
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lol @ Ser

Yep, I think we all know that the dog is a female... It's just a given.


Thanks for this, John. I needed a funny image as I sit here wide awake in the middle of the night.  

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.
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Awesome write!

~Alli~

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They might well enjoy each other's company.

And ... whether fat or slim, old or young .... the END is just a new BEGINNING.

Great image.
Love, Margherita
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LOL, some unusual senryu imagery

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BUT WAS SHE GIVIN THE DOG A BONE
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Little girl
in memory of her
beloved grandma.

 
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