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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-06 08:00 AM



it was innocent enough
just the rain and the window
with a neon tavern sign
and a fireplace in the corner

a couple of glasses
of an "it is ok" wine
and he left in a hurry
before you started crying

and then there was time
too much for people like us
and that song I played
in search of another

you said it was lovely
and did I know it was yours
like some other song was mine
but the lonely in your eyes

was the same kind
and just a dance or two
was not quite warm enough
to keep us through the night

but there are other ways

______________
Dark


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-12-06 08:04 AM


Dark,
There are always other ways. Enjoyed

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-12-06 08:04 AM


ok, so now you've got my curiosity juices flowing, and I'm even swishing em around in my mouth...wondering....How?

Smiles and hugs

Morning Dark

keeping my fingers crossed for a sequal....


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-12-06 08:14 AM



Smiling at Lee J...
sounds like a story brewing...
is it as strong as good coffee?

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
4 posted 2004-12-06 08:54 AM


other ways, indeed...

always a thrill, darkie...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-12-06 02:01 PM


You bet there are other ways.
Hugs YOU!

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6 posted 2004-12-06 03:05 PM


You surely could keep this one going, and I will be looking for it as well.  Nicely done Dark!

                        
Let there be peace on earth ~ and let it begin with me

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-12-06 03:05 PM


You whisper the lonely so very well -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-12-11 08:29 AM


beautiful
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