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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
when you said you'd love me forever I forgot to ask how long your forever was when you said you would love no one after you loved me I forgot to ask who no one really was when you said I'd always be in a spot of your heart I forgot to ask what size spot of your heart that was you said you'd never forget me now you can't seem to remember me when I told you that I'd love you for an Eternity I forgot to tell you what MY Eternity was when I told you I would love no others I forgot to tell you who MY no others was when I told you you'd always be part of my heart I forgot to tell you MY whole heart is what that part was you said you'd never forget me now you can't seem to remember me I told you , I'd Always remember you Now, no matter how hard I try I just can't seem to forget you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sad but true... M |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I hate that love always has a way of stabbing us in the heart, through the back... every time. The best to you... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I guess we hold those memories of what they said both in our heart and constantly in our head , its my belief our memories remain , there's are brief Hope |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
OOhhh I like this one!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when you said I'd always be in a spot of your heart I forgot to ask what size spot of your heart that was And the learning leaves your heart in tatters... I know this well. *S* Painful but excellent write! *S* |
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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
Thank You Guys all so much !!!!!! I wrote that one way too quick, but with the pain , all too fresh.... :-( |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the best writing comes from emotion, good or bad...and pain is a great inspirer I love this write, and can understand so well |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I have felt this exact same thing in my life before. It doesn't feel good when love doesn't seem to be there anymore. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...to some forever means until the next one comes along...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think there are far too many of us who can identify with your words! ~ Fortunately, time is a great healer!  Love & healing Light, EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yes, sad but true.  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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